this was meant 2 b a quickie pic and i worked SO hard on it. *falls on bed in exhaustuon* but i REALLY hope it loos good.
DBF in panel 1: Hi there! How's things? DBF in panel 2: owch! What was that? hey... i've gotten chubbier! DBF in panel 3: HEY! my hair! what happened to my hair?! DBF in panel 4: a paw?! my hands a paw... um... wait... i think i know what is happening now. DBF in Panel 5: I've been changed into a black bear! ok THAT is friggen awesome! Bet that it was JPM as a bee that did that. I shouldpay him back someday ^^'.
(I worked hard on this, so PLZE comment.) (Also, it's good 2 b back doing art ^^)
Oh my god, where to begin? The anatomy is incomprehensible. The first chick's hand is bigger than her head, her right arm is longer than the left arm, her neck doesn't look like it can support her head (then again, none of their necks can) and either her pants are really low or her vagina (Shoot me for using female anatomy) is really at her knees. Hell, feet don't curve the way you drew it.
Even then, the anatomy doesn't improve to much through out the transformation, with the 3rd and 4th part of the transformation's arms being incredibly mangled.
The clouds also look way too rigid to be classified as clouds, so maybe you can get a program like Paint.net and use the airbrush tool. The concept is something I don't usually see, but i'll probably forget it later on.
wat? no ...no no no no! nothing like that. I actually *blush* i actually haven't started any other requests yet. it's nothing 2 do with ur request being gross. heck, I'm looking forward to doing it. I just need some more time. i'm SO soorrry!
Even then, the anatomy doesn't improve to much through out the transformation, with the 3rd and 4th part of the transformation's arms being incredibly mangled.
The clouds also look way too rigid to be classified as clouds, so maybe you can get a program like Paint.net and use the airbrush tool. The concept is something I don't usually see, but i'll probably forget it later on.
With Some Love- Deviant-Lazar
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